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E.O.T.C Week Diary by Fifita


Have a read about Fifita's E.O.T.C Week experience. In Room 14 we have been learning to re-craft our writing, as we know there is always room for improvement. Fifita has made some great improvements to her diary, please have a look and leave her some feedback.

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  1. Anonymous13 April 2016 at 00:06

    Hi Fifita, WOW, this work that you have done is AMAZING!! We can tell that you putted a lot of effort to your work. You have no mistakes, and again nice photos and ideas. Great work. I hop a lot of kids hop on Rm 14's blog and check out you fantastic work. Malo Aupito
    Hermione

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  2. Anonymous2 May 2016 at 14:44

    Fifta, WOW you have done an amazing E.O.T.C Week Diary it's great descriptive and it's really interesting and I really like how you explained your feeling and emotions

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