E.O.T.C Week
This is Vini's E.O.T.C Week diary talking about all the exciting activities and learning that happened during our E.O.T.C week at May Road School. Take a read and experience the week from Vini's perspective.
Kia Ora and welcome to Room 14's blog! We are a bunch of bright young year 4, 5 and 6 students at May Road School and this is where we share our learning.
This is really cool and really awesome it really show what yo did in E.O.T.C week and it is very descriptive but you could really use some pictures and make them a bit bigger.
ReplyDeleteHi Vini I really like your EOTC diary. It sounds like you had fun during EOTC week. You could just add more pictures and make it big! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Vini I love your E.O.T.C week.Maybe next time can you Add more photos.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really amazing Slide about what you have done in E.O.T.C Week, The only thing you can work on is maybe use some Wow Words
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Hi This is a really good slide about EOTC week but next time work on expanding your sentences
ReplyDeleteHi vini i like your EOTC Week slide u should put some more photos
ReplyDeleteNice work Vini i like your diary and good presentation
ReplyDeleteHi, Vini looks like you have put lots of detail and it's nice to see other perspectives of E.O.T.C Week but, could you talk about the sleepover or why you didn't go...
ReplyDeleteHi, Vini looks like you have put lots of detail and it's nice to see other perspectives of E.O.T.C Week but, could you talk about the sleepover or why you didn't go...
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